请大家帮忙看看我的"英语一分钟自我介绍"

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/19 15:07:58
在这里我希望大家能帮忙看看,评价,指点一下
会英语的哥们帮忙看看语法和文字
不擅长英语的兄弟也麻烦看下全篇是否流畅 很急的 ,谢谢大家了!
英语:
Hello,my dear teachers
I am glad to be here for this interview.
My name is Li Junhao.I'm 14 years old.Icome from No.37 middle school of Xiangfan,a beautiful school.
At school,I am a good student, andEnglish is my favorite subject.I have a great English teacher .She's very young and beautiful.She let me feel the charm of english.
I like singing English songs,watching English movies,Ehglish articles _____ (等等←这个帮忙翻译下..)so many thins related to the English.
To participate in this competition is to improve my English and feel the atmosphere of the competition.I know I am not good enough in English,but I will try to do my best.
That's all.Thank you.
您好，我亲爱的老师
我很高兴到这里来此采访。
我的名字是李君豪.我14岁.I来自37中学襄樊，一个美丽的学校。
在学校里，我是一个好学生，英语是我最喜欢的学科.我有一个很棒的英语教师。她很年轻和漂亮.她让我觉得英语的魅力。
我喜欢唱英文

She let me feel the charm of english中的let改为lets.
so many thins related to the English中的the去掉.
等等:ect.或者and so on.
总体来说够流畅了,我不知道那个比赛的要求具体是什么,可是里面讲老师和你喜欢英语的内容貌似多了点.个人觉得,你应该说的别的爱好(eg:like swimming,reading novels之类的),不要为了英语比赛而说太多关于英语的东东,自然点比较好.

Hello,my dear teachers
I am glad to be here for this interview.
My name is Li Junhao.I'm 14 years old.Icome from No.37 middle school of Xiangfan,it is a beautiful school.
At school,I am a good student, and English is my favorite subject. I have a great English teacher. She's very young and beautiful. She makes me feel the charm of english.
I like singing English songs,watching English movies, reading English articles etcetera... anything things related to the English.
To participate in this competition is a means to improve my English and experience the atmosphere of the competition.I know I am not good enough in English,but I will try to do my best.
That's all.Thank you.